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Rusty Thoughts

I can’t believe it, I just accidentally ditched my blog post again, before I’d finished creating it! This is getting beyond a joke. I haven’t done today’s poem yet though, but I know the poetry prompt for #poemadayfeb for the 23rd of the month is “Rust”. I am now heading off to a word document, so I can do the rest of this post, including a poem, and won’t lose it again!

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Back again, with my thoughts and poem for this new poetry prompt. Phew!

Rust is there in the lives of us all, to some extent, I’m sure, out in the country though, I’m sure there is more rust. We live on a small rural zoned property, with a fair bit of mostly bare earth, and sometimes find rusted horseshoes, great big ones, far bigger than the ones my horse training dad put on his harness racing horses.

The paddocks around here, of which there are many, would have been ploughed, and sown and reaped, with the services of the trusted Clydesdale horse (or similar heavy horse). Those great big horseshoes would have come from such a horse, as the land our house was built on would have previously been farmland, as is all of the land around our home.

Rust is what happens to metal when it oxidises. So when metal is exposed to moisture and oxygen, it oxidises and degrades (goes rusty), and rusted bits flake off. Or something vaguely like that – I’m neither a clever researcher nor a scientist …

Another fact in my life relating to “rust” is that the horse my father had at one stage in his stables, was a gentle plodder, former harness racing horse, named (I think) Rusty Roads. I think Dad may have saved Rusty, as we called him, from certain death at the knackery, and gave him to us kids to ride. It was fun for a while, but I can’t remember when it was we had him, or when he went, the facts of it have rusted away. So many horses came and went at the stables, as always happens …

Graham and I now have a ‘decoration’ on the front veranda. It is about the size of a dog, and is in fact the shake of a dog, made out of corrugated iron. There is a collar around the neck with the name “Rusty” attached to it. We bought him on a trip to Sydney, because we had a little bit of money to spare and both liked the look of him. Rusty guards our front door, from where he sits, chained loosely to one of the veranda posts.

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I still don’t have a poem yet though, do I? I’m thinking haiku or something small like that …

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No, I wrote a thoughtful little poem about a terrible thing, and hope others may find it as interesting as reading, as I found writing this. It’s about some things I’ve been thinking about, the possible reasons that men commit suicide, a terrible way to end a life, I feel, awful for anyone to feel so low that death seems a better thing to them.

If the poem to follow sparks problems for you, please call:

Lifeline tel:1-800-273-8255 or seek other help

 

Anyway, here is today’s poem, and I have caught up – back again tomorrow with a new blog post about the new poetry prompt:

 

Rusty Horseshoe

What was the suicide rate

for farmers in the olden days,

I wonder? As high as nowadays?

One horse powered farming

compared to the massive

machines used now –

I’m thinking about

the gentle task of tending

to the gentle giant who’d pull

the plow, & take kids for a ride –

big brown eyes, solid

& dependable, always …

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Thinking About the Sun

I’m running behind a little with the #poemadayfeb challenge. I need to write a poem about the sun, which was yesterday’s prompt, and then check out what the prompt is for today, and write a poem based on that prompt, and of course, put both of my poems up here on this blog, the ‘Sun’ poem first, and then another post for whatever today’s prompt is. Fun, fun, fun.

Not so much fun is the fact that I had already written my poem for yesterday’s prompt, an in depth bit of discussion and then a lengthy poem of quite a few words, that I lost by accidentally hitting the wrong key, and making it just disappear, never to be seen again. So instead, I will write a stripped back poem, possibly encompassing some of the thoughts from the post that disappeared.

And this time I will make sure I don’t make the whole thing disappear. Writing these things on something else and then doing a copy/paste thing is a much safer idea, so I think I’ll finish this off somewhere else. But I’ll be back, don’t you worry about that!

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OK, I’m back, as I said I would be, and I now have a very, very stripped back poem compared to the original one which I carelessly destroyed, never to be seen again …

I think I prefer this poem, or I may be trying to gee myself up so I don’t hate myself for being so silly and destroying all of those words. The other poem had some of my research in it, that I did earlier today, and it had a photo of a mandarin tree, and some things about photosynthesis, and such things. Not this time though, that’s all gone.

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Instead, I have this photograph of the moon, I think from the full moon before the previous one. I don’t remember why I took the photo now, but it was there, I was there (outside on the back veranda), and so I did. This photo, as the photo of the now forever lost blog post, is relevant to the poem, which I will post right here! Thanks for visiting, feel free to add to the discussion if you wish too!

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Sun Thoughts

Black sky, pinprick stars

each a sun, eons old

possibly dead, but

visible to us, somehow …

 

Eastern glow, bright ball

rising, sky’s sunrise hues

then that azure sky

Australians love so much.

 

Sun rising, rising

temperature’s rise too,

then sunset colours

and evening comes –

 

black, and the moon,

those stars, and each star

with its planets,

and each planet, its moons –

 

our solar system,

each star’s solar systems,

galaxy upon galaxy

swirling together, moving.

 

All together, making up

the universe, moving,

ageing, dying, as we too,

move, age and will die …